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SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

0 posted 2004-01-09 03:01 AM

Here's to best friends lost for time.
To a red and tear streaked face.
To losing grip on all your life,
and to falling out of grace.

Here's to what I felt today.
To my heart ache and my tears.
To everything that I've lost,
and to darker growing fears.

Here's to life and wanting.
To unrequited love.
To the person that I long to be,
and to the one I'm dreaming of.

Here's to being lonely.
To loving those no longer here.
To never knowing if or when,
and to hopes the days will clear.

Here's to finding love again.
To holding your head high.
To never hiding from your fate,
and to never saying goodbye.

rose
Member

since 2003-08-02

Posts 53

1 posted 2004-01-09 02:42 PM

here's to your being a great poet! your poem was excellent, i thought--good rhyme, meter, and of course, message. i really appreciated it.

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

2 posted 2004-01-09 09:50 PM

Very well done!

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2004-01-09 11:33 PM

This was really good. I'm putting it in my library. Thanks for the read.
Jen

Whoever said "Tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all" obviously never loved.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-01-20 10:07 PM

Ahh... another great poem, from a great poet! i really enjoyed this one, it was beautifully written!!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

5 posted 2004-01-21 11:56 PM

That was a good poem, I don't have much to comment on, apart from the fact that it was good. Well done, I look forward to many great things from you, but maybe make some of your verses a bit long? Forget structure...make it flow.

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

6 posted 2004-01-22 01:20 AM

Great poem! I especially liked this lines:

Here's to finding love again.
To holding your head high.
To never hiding from your fate,
and to never saying goodbye.

Again, so so good! -Jamie

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

7 posted 2004-01-23 12:27 PM

GREAT poem

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