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Teen Poetry #7

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drummerboy678
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since 2003-10-28

Posts 134

0 posted 2004-01-21 12:39 PM

I thought of an idea, but couldn't really express it well. Please give any opinions on this one, as I'm afraid it only makes sense to me right now.

Thanks.
Prophetic silence whispers,
calling casually,
I listen
I learn
I hear meaningful nothingness,
consequential oblivion.
Silent, secluded cohort,
this companion called loneliness

I am alone,
I am alive.

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

1 posted 2004-01-21 12:44 PM

this is oo nice....keep it up..and keep writing dont ever feel down we all love ur poems...

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-01-21 02:28 PM

I really like this poem. It makes sense to me, but not neccasarily in the way it was supposed to. I think every poem conveys something different to other people.
Excellent job, thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

3 posted 2004-01-21 09:45 PM

That was good, but yeah i understand the fact that only you can understand it. Though i like your usage of words. well done, keep it up.

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