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Teen Poetry #7
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the_fortress
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 28
0 posted 2004-01-21 03:14 PM


Through the hate and criticism
We’ve maintained our self-esteem
But as our confidence drops
We wish of more peaceful places

Getting caught in a endless dreams
Unable to concentrate
The reality is too much to bear
Not wanting to be worthless

In seconds the bell will ring
And we will be set free
Hopefully for a long time
Away from this wretched place

Watching as others take paths
Of failure and sorrow
Worrying of me as I go along
What will become of my future?
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ascending_ecstasy
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since 2004-01-21
Posts 102
1 posted 2004-01-21 09:34 PM

That was pretty good, don't worry about the structure of your writing, just let it go...
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