Teen Poetry #7 |
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colifer Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 37Ohio |
There’s a thing with a winding neck and long, thin, fingers and toes and he’s the reason for all of your woes. He’s got round empty eyes and an almost shamefully pointed head and he’ll haunt us until we’re dead. He’s trapped inside an empty cage and his skin is blacker than the bars at night but his eyes, they glow and unreflecting light. He climbs the walls and perches he’s trying to get a better view look closely...he’s looking at you. And above him there’s a banner as painfully black as tomorrow and it reads the creatures name...sorrow. |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
I got the shivers off this one. Now I will not sleep tonight for sure. Pointy heads will scare anyone, even if it wasn't sorrow in disguise. I wish there was a banner like that so I would know when not to bother. NJS |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ha ha ( i laugh like french man) very creative, very. excellent write. [This message has been edited by dertah (10-03-2003 12:30 PM).] |
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