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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-01 03:02 PM

Listen to me
I've got a story to tell
about a place
between heaven and hell

Not just one locale
but a place within a place
a different story
behind every face

Short stories long stories
stories that have no end
tales of the straight and narrow
and those that twist and bend

Stories of death
dragon's fire
and angel's breath
with evil desire

Stories of birth
birth of dreams
in heaven and earth
and unearthly screams

Listen to me
I've got a story to tell
about a places
where the stars have fell

Stories of pleasure and pain
with everything in between
like the voices
of the ones unseen

Unseen things like love
and happy endings
blessings from above
hearts that need no mending

Stories are all I have
and a broken heart
whenever I find an angel
my love is torn apart

Listen to these stories
and listen to them well
maybe you'll find heaven
and avoid this hell

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
-"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

1 posted 2003-10-01 03:31 PM

WOW...this was truly awesome, i don't even know what to say, i loved it. thanks for the great read
~sha-sha

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-10-01 06:04 PM

really well done

lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

3 posted 2003-10-01 07:37 PM

WOW.......... impressive, i don't think you need any critiques...........
lauren

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

4 posted 2003-10-02 02:26 AM

Ohhhh, right to the jugular. Intense and in your face I like that. Theres some guy on a rock on top of a mountain somewhere whose saying this. Did I mention he doesn't blink?? I want to hear the stories, teach me and maybe we can all avoid this hell you write of. I'm impressed.

NJS

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-10-02 10:00 PM

I don't think I could add much more to everyone else's comments.
I got the same thing from this poem, Wow. Excellent piece!
I really really love it!

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

6 posted 2003-10-03 12:39 PM

"hearts that need no mending," that where i want to be. excellent write.

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