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Ben Junior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 21 |
This could be a little hard to understand so it probely helps to know its about heroin addiction The mind of unconscious motion Is flooded in pacifying devotion Caught the dragon in a sliding rake Sifting over light to conceal the fake As a tired sunrise is crushed for mirage sake Ghosts stagger over the pathway Shattering stones in stones way A riot of thoughts in vapoured sonar Now the crowded loner Puffing the filth of a drifting aroma Tattooed tears slid down a pallid cheek Seeping through the tear on a ticking leak Lying lost in a familiar place As a clenched palm falls from a sunken face A set stage with no cast Dissolves into a blurred past As the flicking of an obscured sign Portrays a haunting token on a bruised skyline Tattoo tears running down a pallid cheek Unearthing comfort in a slipping leak |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow. I loved your poem. Very deep and touching. I hope to hear more. ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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