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Teen Poetry #7

After All That

RedDiamond1307
Junior Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 20

0 posted 2004-01-13 02:19 PM

Why would you hurt me so painfully the way you did?
Why would you take away my fragile soul and bare my heart?
The 2nd time you wanted to kill, I forbid,
Where you went wrong, I could never start.
You killed me once to many,
But it wouldn't happen again.
You shouldn't of hurt me that way, if any,
That's when all the pain began.
You told me you truley loved me,
for some reason I stupidly believed.
After all that, why couldn't you just let it be?
My unconcious mind and torn heart you decieved.
You killed me and said it was for the best,
That was such a lie,
I should of layed you down to rest,
I should of let you die.
After all that I won't come back,
I still refuse to ask why.
I won't let you leave and pack.
After all that, I still won't let you see me shiver and cry.

Xonicx
Junior Member

since 2004-01-14

Posts 20
Vancouver, WA

1 posted 2004-01-14 04:43 PM

I like the poem, some deep thoughts in there, nice. I hope things work out for you, good luck.

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lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

2 posted 2004-01-14 11:37 PM

Very deep. I liked it a lot!

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

3 posted 2004-01-15 10:31 PM

really really good keep it upp..u should start writting some books

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