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akforty7 Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 18 |
A tear rolls down The young man's cheek. He never really thought, He'd be that weak. Does she know what she does, When he tries to show his care? The way she acts It's like he's not even there. He tries to cheer her up, In hopes that she would smile. But he seems to be ignored, For the whole long while. She knows not what she's doing, Nor the pain in his chest. But the young man sucks it up, And just pledges her his best. Other people have told him, The things that they do see. For the woman is you, And that young man is me. But despite all the pain and fear, I give you my heart. I'll be here for you forever, You see, I've cared right from the start. |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
really really gooo keep it upppppppppppp..... |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuu raeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeech EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEErrrrrrrrrrrueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek |
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