Teen Poetry #7 |
Destiny |
lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
I was lost So many times Waiting for my rescuer Dreaming of how he would be Dreaming of his face His kindness His smile I've fallen More times then I can get up Do I finaly get what I deserve? Are my dreams coming true? It's to hard to belive My search is over I have found him My love, my soul Now that I found him I don't want to let go It brings my heart steady It makes me want to belong This love, I can't let go As soon as I start slipping now His hands lift me He wont let me fall Everything feels so much lighter These worldly burdens that I bore You make it all disapear You make it all matter Kind arms hold me near Where would I be without you I don't want to even know Before my heart felt so fragile It's been droped, forgotten My Heart now feels light It Feels full I must have known you beyond this life Because it feels so real It feels like destiny I was ment to be here Right here, with you |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
This is really sweet. Nice write. Jen Dying |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
reallly nicee..keep it uppp...and keep writting |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
One word to describe this and that word is BEAUTIFUL! Keep up the good work hun very sweet poem about what destiny actually means to someone. Hugs, Chris |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sounds like you have yourself quite the guy!! Beautifully written... Standing on the edge of the world |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Another great write from you! I hope to hear more. ~kissa~ |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
It was a really cute and sweet poem, keep writing! ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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