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Teen Poetry #7

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Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2004-01-08 02:53 PM

This poem was written to in response to a book I have to read in english. The book is non-fiction and called Into the Wild.

Sitting in a field.
Itchy feet.
Warm wind turns to frost,
Brillinat bright snow blinds him.
Itchy feet.
Heatwave Arizona,
Frisk frozen flakes fall,
Dreaming dreams,
Memories he's never made.
Itchy feet.
Looking at the sunrise,
Breathing in Alaska.

Im a child,
who writes adult poetry.

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

1 posted 2004-01-09 07:11 PM

i like this one. its good. some parts were like a tongue twister. but good all the same. i like the additions of the itchy feet. it made me giggle. but maybe i missed the meaning. anways. good write

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

2 posted 2004-02-01 12:34 PM

by the way

Match encourages Constructive Critiques: "Sting like a bee...I can take it i've been hurt before. Im emmune to emmotion so hit me with what you got!"

ah.... immune.

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