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Teen Poetry #7

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SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-12-30 09:37 PM

Devotion is born
On metal spring mattresses
In the dead cold of winter
When everything seems to stop moving
And a smile is hard to come by and
Once one is found
It is bottled in green
And we drink what we can
To keep ourselves warm
At least until spring
At least that's what we tell ourselves.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2003-12-31 01:20 AM

This was very unique, kudos for that! It made me sit back in my chair and do the whole "huh..." thing while thinking about possible meanings. Very Nicely done, woke my brain right up!!
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

2 posted 2003-12-31 01:28 AM

good stuff right there.

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