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Teen Poetry #7

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Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2003-12-30 01:26 AM

I havent been around here in a good while, but here's a poem I wrote my wonderful ladyfriend haha.

When I gently rub your arm
and say I'd do you no harm
I want you to believe me

When I brush your hair away
from your gorgeous face
It means I never want you to leave me

Now I dont have much to give
but a tight hug or gentle kiss
And I hope it doesnt bother you a lot
Because I'm trying and I love you with everything I've got

-Stinky Twinkie likes his girlfriend many alots.-

[This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (12-30-2003 01:32 AM).]

LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

1 posted 2003-12-30 01:35 AM

so.. you think you're cute, huh?...replying to my poem like that... well I got news for you buddy...... um... it was cute.. haha Oh, and your poem was really sweet... Your girlfriend is really lucky. *wink wink*

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-12-30 04:38 AM

that,,,is so cute
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

3 posted 2003-12-30 06:35 PM

Glad to see you back around here! I really enjoyed the poem. I thought it was very sweet and your girlfriend is a very lucky woman indeed! Very short and simple but very emotional, nicely done!

~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

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