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A Poem To The Devil
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A Poem To The Devil |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
You, You… go away Come and hurt me another day You make me sick You make me mad You make me hateful You make me sad You make me cry You make me sing You make me curse And everything… everything, but happy… What is happy? I’ll never know I’ve never been there To even show YOU have ruined my life… …But at least you’re happy! |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
Thats a really good poem you got there. I think it has a lot of animosity and words that get the point across well. I enjoyed reading this one (again) haha. Good Job! -Stinky Twinkie- |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
too many blame all their woes on "the devil", no matter what,,,,,he is never happy, no matter how much we suffer Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
but i am happy.... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
strongly felt emoitons in this one. Nicely done. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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OO_the_irish_one New Member
since 2003-12-29
Posts 4Cali |
very well written |
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crystalclearpoems Junior Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 16 |
very good poem! |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
great writing.but i pray for u today,that as the new year approaches,the light himself will show himself to u and the devil will flee and u my friend will know happiness forreal!!! |
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