Teen Poetry #7 |
For all the girls who need a guy friend |
Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
I Am Always Here! Tell me if your hurting Please let me feel your pain. Because I will never leave you standing In the pouring rain. When your world is clouded over... When you don't know who to turn to... Just cry those tears and come to me For I am always gonna be here for you! Lay your head on my shoulder, Tell me all your troubles and fears. I will listen to your stories, And I will try to dry your tears. So, when your world goes out of control Your life no longer a straight line You can come to me...I'll make you see That everything will soon be fine. Your life is what you make of it So, do you have got to do But remember this: when you don't think you can go on I am and always will be there for someone like you! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That's very sweet! So how many girls have responded to it? ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
ummm...it was cute. it didnt have a ny ground breaking thoughts or anything, but it was a solidly written poem. -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
That was really sweet, it flowed really well too nice write ~*~Karen~*~ |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... It was so sweet. I wish more guys were like that! I hope to hear more of your poems. ~kissa~ |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Kinda makes me sad, but that's a different story. I really love this, thank you for sharing. W.W. |
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Strider612 Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46Alabama, United States of America |
Do the poets ever receive a reward for their work? I hope you find your worthy prize for your labor. |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Thank you all so far for the wonderful comments that you have written if anyone wants to get in touch with me feel free to im me on aol instant messenger chrissccr18 or email me at [email protected] i look forward to hearing more and posting more love poems and stuff like that |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is soooooooooooooooooooooo sweet.... wish more guys were like that too in australia...... nice write.... keep up the writing. Mel |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked this, I guess your just one of those guys who is always there and is a super sweetie but never gets any action jk, anyways nice write! |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
This is without a doubt the sweetest poem that i have ever read. I know that with the guys that i have been with, i wanted them to say those words to me, but they never did, and i lost all faith in men, but this goes to show you that there still are sweet guys out there that acutally will take the time out to make a woman feel good about herself...i loved it and thanks so much for sharing it with us, i am really looking forward to reading more from you....well done! **There is no such thing as a promise!!** |
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crystalclearpoems Junior Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 16 |
very good poem! |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
i just wanted to say that this is a great poem, and that Olive_8 is my sister. |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
That was a very good poem, it definitely made me feel better after reading it. It's romantic, easy to read, and a good rhyming pattern and rhythm. Keep it up! |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
Every girl that has you for a friend is a very lucky person! Great job |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
A sweet post. The only thing I wonder is if it's sincere or just a way to pick up the ladies. lol Either way it was nice. *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
A sweet post. The only thing I wonder is if it's sincere or just a way to pick up the ladies. lol Either way it was nice. *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Yes it definitely is sincere coming straight from my heart. Thank you for all the great comments once again. |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
OMG!!! This is the sweetest poem i have ever read. I wish I could have someone who cared about me that much. Keep up the good work. |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
that was really sweet! thats the kind of guy i have been searching for but cant find in my school! "What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing." |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
awww wow, this is so sweet! I know very few guys that are as sweet as you, you're rare! Awesome poem, very sweet! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This poem is just sooo sweet...i'm at a loss of words!! Do you have a girlfriend? If you do, give this to her!! GREAT JOB!!! ~Alli~ I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry. |
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Manth88 Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45IL, USA |
Hey, You really must be a sweetie, wish I could find someone that sweet! I like yur poem alot! You could sweep any woman off their feet with that one! !^*Manth88*^! [This message has been edited by Manth88 (08-25-2004 01:03 AM).] |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
i loved it but the only i dont like is the last line "I am and always will be there for someone like you!" it would of sounded better if u just said "i am and always there for u" Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you.... |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
i thought this one wa really felt out! ~Express Yourself~ |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwwwwwww this was sweet. guy friends are always great to have. they can go beat up other people who hassle ya hahaha. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Amen brother! Reminds me of myself (though I never had the... brass ones ... to put it in words. Until now, anyway, but you beat me to it, oh well. Very well felt out. Proves that not all of us guys are insensitive pricks. Like most of our gender here, you've a good heart. Never let that go. BTW, also brings to mind Maroon 5's "She Will Be Loved" [center]"I'm burning in the heavens, |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
awww... that's so cute. Hey i'm Kylie and Courtney is one of my good friends. I just need you to know, that she is going through some tough crap with her stupid abusing ex- b/f. She really needs to read this.But she really needs a good friend to come in to show that that person cares. She just doesn't trust anybody right now, cause everybody really took it hard when them two broke up. Even I was surprised that she had enough guts to even get in his face. She's a real sweet girl. And i think she needs a guys or even somebody that will listen to everything that she has to say. She won't talk to anybody that used to talk to her when she was dating that jerk and she really needs a shoulder. So if you can just talk to her. She's really hurting inside. Even though you can't see it, b/c she hides it very well. I know deep down inside she is hurting really bad. So if you can just talk to her. But other then that, I think this was a great poem. It shows out who you really are. And we woman need those guys out in the world. Thanks for sharing with us. And Please get in contact with Courtney. I never know what she might do next. |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Sorry bout Kylie, the girl above. She's always up in my buisness. So I see you have some fans.lol. I really do like this poems of yours Chris. Maybe you can have some time to write some more from you. =) |
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scooby_girl14 New Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 1idaho, usa |
that was very sweet sometime it's hard for a girl to find a guy who will listen to them~your a sweet heart~ ~lost in life with nowhere to go~ |
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musicgirl3698 New Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 4 |
It was a beautiful poem. Make sure to always be proud of your work |
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nicole leigh Junior Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 44Eau Clair Wisconson |
dat was rly rly good! NIKKI |
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jessi New Member
since 2008-04-22
Posts 2 |
i know this is rather old, but i liked reading. i really wish i had someone like that =/ |
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Bahigano Junior Member
since 2008-05-13
Posts 31Nebraska |
Your a sweet heart i have read this poem a lot. i hope your really that sweet in real life because if you are your friends that are gurls are lucky. always lea |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
great poem again this is old but it would be nice if there were more guys like you |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
This is a great poem. I LOVED it. it makes me want to be your friend. haha |
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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31Terrell,Texas |
I LOVE you.I love your poetry. Why,oh,why can't all boys be like you? I am envious of all your lady friends They had better treat you right, OR ELSE. We are all unique in Jesus' eyes. |
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