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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2005-06-26 05:30 AM

...dishonesty...

          ...of the mind...
           ...heart...

      ...sliding down my fingers...
                ...it lingers...
       ...knowing it has gone too far...

    ...i kry ...
                 ... making sense only of
...things that aren't...
      ...real...

...it doesn't krawl bak...
                ...i die...

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

1 posted 2005-06-28 05:28 PM

i like this poem, i dnt quite understand it-i understand it but there is something htat lies beneath, it keeps me wondering, i like it though.

shara

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-06-28 07:07 PM

Understanding this well. Reminds me of my ex.

Excellent.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2005-06-28 11:43 PM

sadly enough this reminds me of my boyfriend.

love will make you beautiful

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

4 posted 2005-06-30 06:20 AM

Thanks for all your words!

And I think Cloud 9 snags the underlaying thoughts best!

spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

5 posted 2005-06-30 07:15 PM

hey! i like this alot its nice...i want to read more from u..keep it up!!

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

6 posted 2005-06-30 10:29 PM

Hey stranger

It's nice to read from you again. I really liked this.. as was mentioned before, it's more what isn't said than what you do say.. you say just enough, and we understand the rest. That takes a very high level of skill, something I have never attained. I really liked this

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

7 posted 2005-07-02 09:19 PM

Spaz, Lovebug---thanks alot for your comments! I really appreciate them!

Valkyrie
New Member

since 2009-03-02

Posts 1

8 posted 2009-03-02 06:27 PM

interesting but good.

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