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Hazel Eyes |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Every once in a while I forget how to smile Sometimes I don't know which way I should go Then I open my eyes I look at you and all the pain dies Someday I'll see what it takes to make you happy I don't know why but somehow you don't have to try You always make me smile somehow with your unique style I knew I was lucky the very first day cupid struck me I love you |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
this poem is very simplistic, and yet soo meaningful. i feel this way about a special dude in my life, im sending it to him, this is great!!! write some more, im definately interested in what you have to say!! |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sounds like someone's in love.  I liked this--the eyes are so captivating!  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
great job.i cant wait to hear more of your stuff! happy writing! -*-broken627-*- love is like a puzzle when the pieces dont fit u have to move on |
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instead New Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 3monroe,nc |
this is really good i like the simplicity |
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pammy Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 50California |
this is really good.. i also have that special someone that can make me smile for no reason every time i see him....great job.. |
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Strider612 Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46Alabama, United States of America |
It's a nice format for a change. Well rhymed and well written. I hope you can continue to produce original, creative works. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Very sweet, well written poem. I especially love the 3rd stanza. Excellent job, and going in my library. W.W. |
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