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Confused Insomnia |
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Trouble Breathing Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 63 |
Have you ever sat alone, On a bench in the park? Not a sight,Not a moan Just you sitting alone, On a wooden bench next to a telephone, These are the thing I see in my mind, No cause and effect, Just a head full of static, Been tangled and wrecked, I can't even see what's not in my mind, I think I'm finally going blind You'd see what you can find, if you could just... Get into my head, Maybe you would see, No matter what I do, No matter how I try, I'll always be half the man I used to be, On the outside looking in, That is not how I am But I know if you could just... Get into my head, Maybe you would understand, How I think is who I am, But who I am is not who I choose to be, And if I cannot be who I want to be, And I cannot think like I want to think, What is there left to say... When all I want is to weep myself to sleep? But I cannot sleep, I cannot cry, I can't afford to sink, Because all this time, my eyes stayed open, I'm afraid to even blink |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I think this flowed really well, I've been in that situation before so I know how you feel, nice write ~*~Karen~*~ |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sometimes I feel like half the person I used to be. In fact, I'm sure everyone has felt like that. Well done!  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This poem would make an awesome song! You should try adding some music to it! I really liked it and i hope to hear more! |
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