Teen Poetry #7 |
Withdraw, plz respond |
desperado16 New Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 7 |
Quiet envelopes, Only sounds of Whistling winds Heard, Lingering beside, Steadily evaporating From your Thoughts. You roam, Free of Love and tribulation, While I remain, Bound by Shackles of Love. Love, Turned too Great, forbids Sanity, Must escape, Until sentiments Wither. Worless tones Spew from Trembling lips, Cheeks glisten From restrained Droplets, Surging from Empty holes, Heart seeps, Body bleeds, I perceive, The intricacy of Impending tasks. I fear, When I barricade Myself, Misery will Brew, Friendship will Perish, I'll diminish, Regretting, Not able to Hold you, At all. Silence breaks, Static actualizes, Goodbye unmasks Itself, Half rejoices, Half grieves, Either way, I forfeit You. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmm... well, I liked the rythum. I liked the poem, the ryhme. I liked the fourth stanza the best. Very beautiful. |
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