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Teen Poetry #7

ever changing heart

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-01-02 06:59 PM

Your mind is always changing
You've got me so confused
No matter what the outcome
I'll always care for you
Your heart is feeling changes
And your mind is so confused
You feel that it is over
But do not know what to do
Your heart will choose the right way
And you will follow it
One day it soon will be
The outcome's you and me
I wish you'd tell me the truth
The one true way it is
Then I will finally understand
And truly feel I'm his
So darling try to understand
I need to know the truth
My life is counting on it
Or i'll never move one from you
~~

this is an ancient poem, but it has meaning.

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

1 posted 2004-01-02 09:43 PM

i really liked this poem!
i cant wait to hear more of your stuff!
-*-broken627-*-

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2004-01-03 02:41 AM

Of course it has meaning! and a good one to, very heartfelt piece, I really enjoyed it. The flow was smooth and it transitions nicely, overall wonderfull write.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-01-03 11:11 AM

i agree with bela, it had great flow. great work, i enjoyed it alot!!
-alex

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

4 posted 2004-01-05 06:37 PM

I enjoyed this one very well written good job!

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