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beside you |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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this is another poem for my cousin nic.... beside you im throwing down my heart to lie on the ground next to yours. im shedding these dry tears because we both have emptied our store. im hanging onto prayers for this life is leaving us alone. im standing at the grave with you because pain has left you broken boned. im crying out to you because your sobs are so loud. im seeing right to all the pain inside that clouds. if only it was enough, if only sympathy could go so far, i'd help you find the way that leads you to her shining star. wind blows the leaves around our feet and the lights outside cast shadows, the falling snow makes a tearlit burial all the more desperately sorrowful. sing the sorrow in a strong voice, sing it until your throat bleeds black. sing the sorrow with your tears, im sure that nic already has.... now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Nice, Very nice and the fact that your writting about helping someone I do believe with the loss of someone warms me up inside since i've just lost someone in sept. But please Do remember this okay young, If they push you away its not your fault its that there afraid and never give up on helping someone just take it more slowly. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I have to agree with branden. Once again, a very touching write. You're writing is some of the best I've seen around this forum in a while. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you so much for commenting on my stuff!! it means alot that you guys read this stuff now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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