Teen Poetry #7 |
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Bliss |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
I snuggle into your warm embrace my head resting gently on your pillow. You're staring into my eyes and in the dark lit room I can see your soul connecting with mine. Where did I find you this angel sent to me? I searched for many years and still came up empty. You came along with your big beating heart and you showed me how to love you showed me how to care. I can never thank you enough for being everything I've dreamed of but it's times like this where thank you is never enough. Maybe I'm not perfect but you accept me anyway you love me on the inside as well as out. You never judge or blame me for mistakes you always ask me about my day before I even can speak a word. Because of you, I'm a different person you've made me complete this is what love is, isn't it? If so, I welcome it gladly. |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
This may be love, It may not be also just remember that. You will never know until what you've "thought" you loved is gone, Great write, just saying theres always someone there for you, it doesnt mean your in love. |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
Actually, this poem was to show how much I AM in love lol. I've been with him for over a year now so yeah, neither of us are going anywhere. ![]() |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
heh I think Branden has taken the cynical look on things! I myself enjoyed this piece, it was a quiet heartfelt write and worthy of praise, remember those moments for they truly are seconds of bliss. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
i really like this poem. i'm usually not into the whole love poetry thing, but i can def. relate to this one. it's good not to be cynical and pessimistic. lol. keep up the good work. much love, akie. I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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