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shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

0 posted 2003-09-30 10:02 AM

Remembering like yesterday, the vision still fresh
in my mind, makes my soul feel
cold and empty, as I try to deal w/the pain of not
having you here, I am unable to cope w/issues of
abandonment you caused distorted images are all that
remian in my head, I feel myself beginning to
drown in my own tears, set me free from this hell
in which I have fallen so deep in

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2003-09-30 08:37 PM

I like it but im not to sure what I think about your writing style..well keep on writing

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

2 posted 2003-09-30 09:23 PM

thanks for reading match, this is not my usual writing style, actually it's something different, I am still trying to figure it out myself, thanks again for reading and be blessed.

>>>when you do know how you feel about it, do let me know, thanx

much luv,
sha-sha

sixington
Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 53
Utah

3 posted 2003-10-04 04:00 PM

I liked it. I would say making the first letters caps would really help it, though. i had a hard time getting the connection. keep writing. ~ Amanda

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-10-11 01:10 AM

good onnnnneeeeeee (said in a jim carrey voice)

the kid
Junior Member

since 2005-06-24

Posts 16

5 posted 2005-06-28 09:29 PM

wow i like your poetry too its diffrnt (as of text wise) but change is good i rele like it keep posting nd ill keep reading and stating my opinion on it

much love,
the kid

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-06-28 10:11 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Your first post is actually a very nice Acrostic.
I hope you enjoy your time with us here.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

7 posted 2005-06-30 11:54 AM

enchantress, i have actually been a member since 2002, i think so anyway. this was my first post though, i am glad you liked it. also thanks to "the kid" i'm glad you enjoyed it also.

shara

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