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* shining star* Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76PA,USA |
I wait and wander why it's done, something so perfect tunred out so dumb. I know it can be stopped, with a little help. It hurts deep inside, knowing that you can not do a thing about it. So sit back and watch, as you stomach turns in knots. You cry every night because you sit in fright. So hold back those tears, and get through these years of neverending hell. Why does this fullfill your need? Is it because you bleed? Well hold on tight, this will be a bummpy ride, my troubled friend. [This message has been edited by * shining star* (07-01-2005 03:02 PM).] |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
ive been there w/ someone before... gosh... thats all ive gotta say... w/ her and her mother it was too late.... if i am even translating this right lol if not... its very powerful and sorry. love will make you beautiful |
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* shining star* Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76PA,USA |
This was my first post and really means something to me so hope you like it. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
welcome to pip!  what an emotional first post!  Please check your email for a special greeting |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
this was great, i liked it a lot. it was full of emotion. look forward to more great reads from you. shara |
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