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Teen Poetry #7

How Real?

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-12-08 06:51 AM

Individual shards of glass,
Imbedded in my skin.
Each one standing for a tear.
A tear I’ve shed for you.
As I walk further,
I feel the pain,
As each piece digs deeper.
Don’t think it tickles.
With each step,
I grow weaker,
I look back and see,
Each bloody footprint that
Tell the tales of suffering,
Of torment,
Of lies,
Of hatred,
Of defeat.
They’re scarlet,
Almost black.
Weariness catches up with me,
And I fall to the ground,
The world around me falls with me…
I’m covered in ice-cold sweat,
But safe.
My skin tingles,
From where the shards were.
Just a dream…..
But to real for my liking.

Tell me, how does it feel, to treat me like you do?~Orgy

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-12-08 06:32 PM

Nice write I really liked it because of the picture it created in my mind and because of the emotion you put into it.

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

2 posted 2003-12-08 10:45 PM

I liked this one. very good.

duncan idaho
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

3 posted 2003-12-09 02:03 PM

i'm gonna get this poem tatooed on my back.
how Real?
a little bit, too real.

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