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adbdesperado18 Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 33 |
Finally, this time, I found the one, to share all my love this season A sole problem exists To this man I’m not the one How funny, I still care deeply For I fathom all thoughts I understand, I’m not his love I never will possess that blessing Yet, I can’t rid my heart of emotion I care, always will adoration will never die And never be exposed Consequence, I subsist with only friendship, This connection, however, too bleak and burdensome to bear I desire to spend every free moment with him Anger, That brings anguish, Arises when he ignores, Me I put forth so much And him so little Handling this, Remains not an option I bid attachment Goodbye, Forever |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Great write! I haven't seen you in this forum before, so I'm guessing you're new! I'm sure you'll like it here!  I think you're allowed to only post three poems a day, I THINK. Just thought I'd let ya know! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
Great poem i could really feel the emotion probably because im feeling the same way... cant wait to hear more -*-broken627-*- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
stop using the word exist, it sounds desperate but you get my two opposables |
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