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Teen Poetry #7

No More plz respond

adbdesperado18
Junior Member

since 2003-11-30

Posts 33

0 posted 2003-12-06 05:36 PM

Sickness consumes,
Sick of all the pain
I deal with,

Not one day lives,
Where freedom reigns,
And I enjoy life.

Instead, each morning,
I arise
To stare pain in the eye,
realizing,
That today,
Remains no different,
Another miserable hassle
I endure.

So much expected,
delivering so little,
Pressure,
Finally taken control.

Emptiness consumes,
Criticism fills my ears
I blame myself,
Believe,
Failure

striving harder for perfection.
At the end,
When accomplished everything,
I still feel hollow.

Tired of all,
Pain,
Sorrow,
Agony,
I need a break,
No More

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

1 posted 2003-12-06 06:34 PM

your poems seem so depressing, instead of making a comment on it, im going to try with advice. dont put yourself down for things youve done, this is a journey through life. everyone has hard times and its just expected. your life is what you make of it, if you feel like crap all the time your life will refect on it. Do you get what i mean? lets see some positive poems!!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2003-12-06 07:21 PM

I like this. Good job.

Tell me, how does it feel, to treat me like you do?~Orgy

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