Teen Poetry #7 |
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Why do I love you? |
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mara marti Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 10Chicago, Illinois |
: (I love you and I dont know why But I feel it when I look into your eyes We've only been friends but when will you ever see? That I dont want to pretend that I really want you with me I love your smile it shines like the sun Oh, what about when you laugh now I know your the one Can we please be together? I swear I will love you forever. But how will you ever know? If my feelings I refuse to let show I think im afraid that you'll turn me down and I really do not want to look like a clown But I cannot just stand around I need someone, and that One has been found. So then, why do I love you if we can't be together? I hope you love me too You might not ever be mine But i'll still love you inside My feelings for you are so damn true But I still ask myself why do I love you? and then I think.... just because I do. COPYRIGHT@ |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
that was so very sweet.i hope the person feels as strongly as u do.and pls tell the person..he/she deserves to know.and trust me u'll feel relieved when u unload the burden. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
That was so beautiful. I can relate to it a lot. I have a friend i feel like that for, and i am scared to tell him how i feel, because i don't wanna mess our friendship up, but i am not sure how much longer i can hide my feelings from him. My advice is to tell him. and i think that i am going to take my own advice too! I hope everything works out for you, and i hopw to hear more poems too! always ~kissa~ |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I can also really relate to this, while I know the best thing to do is tell him I know I could never do it because I fear rejection so much, nice write, I thought in certain parts the rhyme and rhthym seemed somewhat forced, but overall nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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