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amnesiac New Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1 |
Paint the shattered remains of my heart with a dark black. Know that the good times will never come back. Ah, but what is this? this one who is such adorable perfection... Hard to believe you are mine, such rare affection. Yellow isn't even my natural selection. Ah, but what is this? are the stars out for her tonight? Smile upon my dry heart, thats suffered such blight. Take this longing of betterment for both me and you.. Desperately entertained by everything you do... Every since the first night,in the dark, I smiled at you. You are so loving, funny, sweet and true. You broke through the night of my depression with the light of your smile. And now every second with you Is more than worth my while. [This message has been edited by amnesiac (01-03-2004 11:27 PM).] |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
::Sniff, sniff:: is love in the air this season or what! My goodness there are a lot of happy in love people! YAY!! This brings great joy to my heart, may I be the first to welcome you to pip! It is my hope that you have a long happy healthy stay here among us! Please check your email for a specail note. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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the_fortress Junior Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 28 |
I liked this a lot. What wonderful imagery throughout the poem. Reminds me of a romantic night. But thats just me. Great poem! |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
WELCOME TO PIP!!!!! err. whattasap.. i was properly warned though. maybe next time i'll listen and not read.. :P hm. i like this. not so much some of the rhyming.. but i really dig the last two lines. |
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