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Teen Poetry #7

A Block in Poetry Flow

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2004-01-04 09:12 PM

Rite now,
i feel so much in my head,
in my heart and in my soul,
yet i know not what to write.

i desperately want to write a poem,
but as hard as i try,
i feel no inspiration,
to flow as always.

I feel my heart bleed,
at this state of nothingness,
this phase that doesnt want to pass.

but soon something shall come,
and i shall write,
with the skill from aboove,
and my heart shall be unburdened,
of all its thots.
Cos once my pen and my paper connect,
sweet words of poetry shall form.

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2004-01-05 10:14 AM

Okay one thing is that I tend to hate mispelled words, it's just me. But other than the mispelled words it is a good poem.

I only know myself...and even that I don't know well.

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