Teen Poetry #7 |
Diffrent Kid |
KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
Were you the diffrent kid? did they laugh at what you did? did you not have money? and did your colths look funny? did you bottle it up inside? to brave to blush yet doomed to hide? did your feelings fall away did your walls grow and darken did you laugh back at them? did you sink did you swim? I was the diffrent kid in the hall they laughed at what I did Stoic my feelings to well hid I was indeed the diffrent kid lashing out against the walls although I built them dark and tall to brave to blush and doomed to hide. Oh so diffrent what lurks inside. Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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wishing on a star Junior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 19sleeping in my warm bed =) |
i know how that is ofr sure!! nice post!!! ~*Me~* young naive & vulnerable to the world |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
sniff sniff... POETIC BRILLIANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can I be your publisher? |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I really liked this, it flowed really well, and was so true to many people because there is always a "different kid", and it's really sad how they are tormented because of who they are. ~*~Karen~*~ |
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