Teen Poetry #7 |
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The Unthinkable Task |
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morgansmiles Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 25hicksville |
I might have posted this before but I can't remember...tell me what you think... Sinking in more than feelings Knowing you won’t be mine Maybe if I let you go now You will come to me in time My skin feels transparent You can see inside my soul My mind full of love for you And that love left untold Fear of rejection Of living with pain I can’t tell you anything And it’s driving me insane Day after day The unthinkable task Of letting you know Of taking off this mask Everyday I’m disguised As a friend who is there You have no idea How much I really care |
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Ally Stone Junior Member
since 2003-10-20
Posts 48D.C. |
What a sweet poem. Normally I don't go for this stuff, but I really enjoyed this one. Keep writing! ~A~ |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
I wonder who this is about... hmm... that is a hard one. i am sorry for what you are going through... i know how it feels. If you need to talk you know where to reach me... love ya babe! Miss ya lots!!!!! ~Jeanette~ |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
This was very sweet, I'm going through the same thing now if it makes you feel any better. ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
This was good. I've been through that, I think most of us have. Well done. Tell me, how does it feel, to treat me like you do?~Orgy |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
Great poem!I love your poetry!I cant wait to hear more!I know exactly what your going through! Cant wait for more! -*-Broken627-*- |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
Great poem!I love your poetry!I cant wait to hear more!I know exactly what your going through! Cant wait for more! -*-Broken627-*- |
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buckysimone Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27 |
Good Stuff.. I really liked it, Its something familar, easy to relate ![]() |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I am going through the exact same thing with one of my guy friends. It reaally sucks. Thanx for the words, I hope to read more. ~kissa~ |
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