Could it have been different?

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Could it have been different?

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2006-09-01 03:16 AM

the way you acted, the way I was
Did either of us know what was to come?
Tell me, how could you have truly believed
that after all you did, it would be you that I 'd need

you lied, and betrayed
and caused to much pain
the things you did
all of those fibs

the outright lies
the teared up eyes
rumors you fed
nasty things you said

too many fights
a waste of life
could it have been different in the end?
had we made more of an effort to stay friends.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2006-09-01 09:02 PM

"the way you acted, the way I was
Did either of us know what was to come?
Tell me, how could you have truly believed
that after all you did, it would be you that I 'd need"

I really thought that this first stanza was the best. It just really seemed to flow and rhyme well.
Keep posting!

~Alli~

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