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Sorrows (First Poem)

Freelancer06
New Member

since 2006-08-31

Posts 1

0 posted 2006-08-31 07:55 PM

If your feeling sad,
then let me hold u tight,
but you say no to me,
so now its over,
many regrets and memories to get over,
but soon I will forget,
this never ending tail,
that will be stuck in my heart for ages,
until I die and I go,
where god will bring me up to heaven,
and then starts a new beggining,
with my lord and savior,
and on to the hearing.

Having to do with me and my ex, very long relationship. New to these forums too!

[This message has been edited by Freelancer06 (08-31-2006 09:23 PM).]

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-09-01 01:07 AM

Welcome to the wonderful world of piptalk freelancer! It’s always enjoyable to see new faces/new poetry and you are no exception; and I must say that I loved this poem.

I think many people can relate to this one because we've all had, or a lot of us have, had bad relationships, so this is something everyone can relate to when reading. At least in my opinion I think that a lot of people can.

Thanks for sharing! I hope that you will continue to post more

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2006-09-01 08:56 PM

Welcome to Pip! I really enjoyed this poem by you and hope to read more of your writings soon!

~Alli~

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