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Deja` Vu
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Deja` Vu |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
what shoud of been triumph,turned disaster I am not sure who was madder at how it had ended without us still friends that you really thought you'd get away with it all really gets me,you didn't realize someday you'd fall if you lie, thats sure to bring you down you sure lied,and you hit the ground by the end most of us hated you for each excuse, we all still knew your greatest mistake was that you kept trying to hurt us, and truthfully you never stopped crying after all I went through should a smiled,when I saw you fall so fast,you lost your place as coolest, you got your fate but as we all watched even as I got what I sought I realized what was happening to you another time,another place, Deja Vu you had put Me through all this turned my world upside down, and missed when you aimed for my pride cause I still had faith inside everything we put you through another time, another place, It was all Deja Vu. |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
wow, crazy, but i wrote a poem almost just like that!!!! lol, i had the same thing "da ja vu" as the thing, so that makes me like this!! lol. very nice write rhia -missy |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
i dont think i ever saw urs, cause i got the idea when i was up in the mountains. and i was upset about drama with my friend. |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
oh, lets see, mine was a long time ago, so im not suprised you didn't see it. but i have to say, i think i like yours better than mine! |
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