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Teen Poetry #7

The White of Winter

SimpleDiscourse
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-11-29 11:56 PM

I have seen the mountains in fall and
I have seen the clearest summer sky:
They pale in comparison
To your eyes through the snow.
Against the white of winter
Everything seems a little bit bolder
And I’m feeling straightforward.
Maybe it is the temperature talking but,
“I wouldn’t mind falling in love today.”

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

1 posted 2003-11-30 12:31 PM

Awwwwww-I definitly liked this one...it is so cute....great work! :o)

*~*Nessa Bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-11-30 03:14 AM

oh wow!! Yay!! this one just made my night!! and I especailly liked the last two lines, how cute! This was sweet and simple and just so warm happy fuzzy feeling-ed! I adored it, lovely piece.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

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