How many time have i said it?

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Teen Poetry #7

How many time have i said it?

buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-08-30 09:47 AM

i know i say im sorry
way too much to you
i know you don't think i mean it
i wouldn't either if i were you

i've hurt you so much
but i can't seem to stop the words
that im feeling and they're rushing
so you get to feel the burn

i wish i knew how to tell you in a nice way
what i don't mean to say
i really just wanna hold you
let our love stay in play

i know you won't forgive me
i really wish you would
im not gonna say im sorry again
cause to you those are just words

i can't say i mean it this time
though, i really do
theres no other way to tell you though
so, all i can say is, i really love you.

the only reason i hurt you
is because im afraid of love
and thats defiantly what i feel with you,
trust me once again,i really care, i do.

can you ever forgive me?
how many times have i said that...?

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2006-08-31 12:07 PM

Another nice write! My only suggestion to you is to use a spell-checker before posting your poems. It only takes two seconds, and it will make reading your poems even more enjoyable then it already is!

~Alli~

secret_truth_lies
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

2 posted 2006-12-29 08:03 PM

Yep i know where you are coming from. I have a problem of commentment, though. I don't know if that's your prob. but it surely is mine. Ever since the person I cared for the most, and loved the most cheated on me. I just couldn't trust a guy since, nor my heart. But you just have to give love another shot. You'll see.

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