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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2006-08-26 04:57 PM

It'd be so easy to move on if I didn't care so much,
it'd be so easy if I didn't crave your touch.

I could just ignore all your feelings and focus on my own,
Focus on the previous experiences that my life has shown.

I could ignore your pain and ignore your words, ignore it all together,
ignore the fact that no matter what, I could be with you forever.

Why couldn't you just be like all the others, just like every other guy,
Lead me on, hurt me again, and then just follow it up with lies.

Tell me why you couldn't make it easier on me, and just hurt me for the last time,
then I could move on without looking back, convincing myself I'm just fine.

But I can't ignore your words, your feelings or your heart,
because they all became so much of me, they became another part.

I can't move on and you know why, you know just how much I care,
You know that not having you in my life is something I cannot bare.

It would have been so easy had you just given up in the end,
then I could focus on what is instead of "what could've been."

AIM-beatufu1tragidy

Tell me what you think about being open, about being honest with yourself.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-08-26 11:54 PM

i liked this it had a lot of emotion and i could really relate to this

good post...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

2 posted 2006-08-27 02:42 PM

i really liked this a lot. i can relate. Great Job!!

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-08-27 10:32 PM

Wow.. Erin, another beautiful write that i can relate to..

Loved it

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

4 posted 2006-08-28 04:01 AM

that was really good. it had alot of emotion in it. to me . one of your best, i think. just cause that is so relatable and it flowed. and all the words fit together really well

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

5 posted 2006-08-28 10:16 AM

wow. i haven't read many of your posts, but ill trust the others and say this is one of your best. the complete best of what i've read. i absolutely commend you by being able to put all feelings so perfectly into poetry.

i will now add you as a poet in my library, well done.
i can completely relate to this, like all others apparently, im suprised we've all expierenced this, i thought i was the only one. but now i see, that others too, are broken sometimes and torn. its good to know, there are other people, who have been hurt too, that way, you don't feel isolated, feel like its just you.

sorry, i've been replying in rhymes today, its rather weird, i know. but i can't seem to get what i want to outt. except for this poem perfectly expresses what I FEEL, as well as what you feel, which shows you are a GREAT poet.

-missy

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