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gozaggss
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since 2006-04-26
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0 posted 2006-08-25 12:15 PM



Strong winds compel me to write this
About all the things that i will miss
Like the sun and the beach. Those carefree days
But it's too bad that nothing good ever stays
The days become shorter, no time for a game
Less fun, more work, it's always the same
Tests and homework, stress and Drama
a fight with a friend, the death of a grandma
Those long but short days...
I'm gonna miss those too, but nothing good stays

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bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

1 posted 2006-08-25 01:24 PM


mmmm....short but sweet most definitely.  I'd hafta disagree with you though. Theres always one good thing that stays.  The Lord Jesus Christ will NEVER leave you : )
But this poem is very good and i enjoyed it alot
thanks for sharing!

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-08-28 11:58 PM


i liked this i felt the truth coming from this poem but.... not everything good leaves...and if it does it leaves a memory behind... some of that that are good ...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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