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Ode to Time Displaced
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Ode to Time Displaced |
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gozaggss Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 33 |
Strong winds compel me to write this About all the things that i will miss Like the sun and the beach. Those carefree days But it's too bad that nothing good ever stays The days become shorter, no time for a game Less fun, more work, it's always the same Tests and homework, stress and Drama a fight with a friend, the death of a grandma Those long but short days... I'm gonna miss those too, but nothing good stays |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
mmmm....short but sweet most definitely. I'd hafta disagree with you though. Theres always one good thing that stays. The Lord Jesus Christ will NEVER leave you : ) But this poem is very good and i enjoyed it alot thanks for sharing! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i liked this i felt the truth coming from this poem but.... not everything good leaves...and if it does it leaves a memory behind... some of that that are good  ...hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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