Teen Poetry #7 |
One Day... MY FIRST POEM |
nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
One day this senseless pain will cease And blood will stop it’s spill One day the walls will crumble down You’ll feel the way I feel But for now I must content myself With living on in pain Clutching to a shard of hope That I won’t go insane You don’t seem to understand Just exactly what it’s like To stand there dying silently After every little fight One day you’ll hold me in your arms Whispering apologies One day we'll smile together In a blissful harmony But for now I must simply daydreaming Of a once and future life Where everything will always be beautiful All it needs is a little time You don’t seem to understand How it feels after every blow I’m in the Hell you’ve locked me into But you will never know One day we’ll be a family Not normal- though that’s alright One day you’ll make your daughter happy And bring back the light |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
that is soooo good. i loved this. amazing. wonderful first post. hope you enjoy piptalk. Welcome!!!! definetly a poem im gonna read again |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi nostalgic*pride, Welcome to passions!~ It is so exciting to see a new face on the site and even more so to read the poems they bring forth... Hope you love the site as much as I have and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your poems. This one was very, very good; full of lots of emotions, you did a good job conveying the emotions to the reader. Thanks for sharing "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Nostalgia... This is a very honest poem, and one that runs ripe with pain and love... I would hope that this is but a passing in your time, or a knowledge of others you know, and you are emoting for them; be that as it may, I do welcome you to Passions, and hope that you will find the Special Greeting in your email to be one of special meaning to you. Sunshine |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow that was an awesome first post i hope to read more from you soon cuz that was great:P and WELCOME TO PIP ... i hope you enjoy it here... i know i do all best wishes hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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mgoodman1989 Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 93Iowa, USA |
This poem, as your first, is seriously a lot better then alot of ppl's 3rd and 4th poems. (not thinking anyone in particular) and is way better then anything i've written.... you have a real talent... keep it up, and continue to share Much love, Michelle *I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!* |
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