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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-08-25 12:49 PM

you won't see her cry
when you hurt her inside
you won't see her cry
it would hurt her pride

you won't see her cry
whe you let her down
you won't see her cry
cause she knows you'd just frown

you won't see her cry
when your words cause her pain
you won't see her cry
cause she knows you' just say she's insane

you won't see you cry
when you break her poor heart
you won't have to see her tears
cause you said goodbye

and i went home and cried and cried.

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-08-26 01:32 PM

awww that's a sad poem, I like this one alot. I hope to see more of your poems in the future. Thanks for sharing.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2006-08-26 05:23 PM

yeah, i was really sad when i wrote it. thank you for replying, ttyl.
-missy

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-08-26 11:38 PM

wow i liked this poem hope to see more from you in the near future:P good post

hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

4 posted 2006-08-28 10:02 AM

sorry i haven't been posting much lately, im trying to force myself to write, but i can't! i hate posting my poetry that isn't good at all, so theres only few that i can post!!=) thanks for the support though.
-missy

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2006-09-03 07:58 PM

Aw, what a sad poem. I hope you're feelings better now, just stop crying and smile!

~Alli~

mgoodman1989
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since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

6 posted 2006-09-04 05:20 PM

I like this one much better then the last one I posted on by you. Very original. And we've all been there Hun, only difference is, you've got us (here at pip) to help you thru your hard times. Hope everything is well,
Much love,
Michelle

*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*

nick_lyss
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since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

7 posted 2006-09-30 05:58 PM

this is a poem but its reallt good

stil_watrs_run_deep
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since 2008-01-05

Posts 14
missouri

8 posted 2008-01-05 02:18 AM

that is an AMAZING poem!

i loved it.. it hits really close to home for me..

you are great!

keep it up!

smiles are universal :]

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