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nostalgic*pride
Member

since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-08-28 07:57 PM

We’re only friends when it’s convenient
And you find the time
You must think I’m stupid
But, Hun, I’m not blind

I know you’ve got your own thing
Different desires in your heart
Still you refuse to just tell me
That we’ve grown apart

And it’s hard to believe
Because we were such great friends
Now everything’s broken
And the wounds just wont mend

Yeah, I’ve heard all the rumors
And dodged all the lies
And yet neither one of us
Is breaking our ties

So until that day comes
When we acknowledge the truth
No more than ‘secret friends’
Is what I’ll be with you

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-08-28 10:08 PM

Wow.. I really liked this.. I love how you started this of.. Great job..

~heather`

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-08-28 11:34 PM

So until that day comes
When we acknowledge the truth
No more than ‘secret friends’
Is what I’ll be with you

i liked this stanza a lot

wow this poem was really good... good write...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2006-08-29 10:30 AM

that just blew me away that it so good, and i can totally relate.

rhia

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-08-30 08:56 AM

Wow!~ That's like all I can say about this poem, it's such a mind-boggler for me to read, cause I've been in "friendships" like this...

I think you described it just right...

Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

5 posted 2006-08-30 10:21 PM

And it’s hard to believe
Because we were such great friends
Now everything’s broken
And the wounds just wont mend

I love this. It really describes my life right now...really good.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

patience_iago
Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 54

6 posted 2006-08-30 11:35 PM

Isnt this true for every teenage girl it seems.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2006-09-03 07:57 PM

Ha, yes, like every other teenage girl out there, I can really relate to this poem.
Actually, the first poem I ever wrote was about this type of thing happening to me, but I think your poem definately came out better, LOL.

~Alli~

MY_ZACHARY
New Member

since 2007-09-02

Posts 1

8 posted 2007-09-02 04:08 PM

Wow! This is amazing! I recentlly did work like this and I love it! Keep up the good work!

nicole leigh
Junior Member

since 2007-09-19

Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson

9 posted 2007-10-03 06:12 PM

wow i luv dis poem u is rly good!

NIKKI

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