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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2006-08-25 12:12 PM



you were madder,
than hell at me,
because of one sentence,
you didn't care to hear,
i want to live with my dad,
please let me be,
and the days,
of my departure draw near,

you took away everything that mattered,
leaving my heart torn and tattered,

i decided to stay,
give it a try,
will it make you more happy?,
me not loving him,
it's a constant question,
i keep asking myself why,
why did i say yes to stay,
when your convinced it's a whim,

you said a lot of things,
i pray you didn't mean,
i'm waiting for my wings,
so i can fly away to dream,


you took away everything that mattered,
leaving my mind burnt and battered,

i'll always love you even though
we fight without end,
and the words you said made it not so,
right now i need love, someone come and be my friend.


A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

© Copyright 2006 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
mgoodman1989
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since 2006-03-05
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1 posted 2006-08-26 06:29 PM


I know how that feels, wanting to be somewhere your not... I also live with my mom, and would love to live with my dad...

*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*

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2 posted 2006-09-04 12:48 PM


Oh wow, I can't even begin to imagine what you're going through.  I hope you're doing ok.

~Alli~

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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3 posted 2006-09-14 02:56 PM


man I feel bad for you. I mean I did used to hate my mother, but I got over it some what fast. But it seems that you are going through more b.s in your life and I'm sorry. I hope you get through it, Just pray that it will all be over sooner or lata. But I'll be praying for you and your mother to get along even better.
                Courtney

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