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Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-08-22 08:50 PM

im just a wanna be
someone that every one knows
that one guy
thats always at the show

up on stage
and playing out his soul
singing his song
thats out of control

the crowds would stretch
to endless limits
i would be the guy
telling everyone theres something in it

the only one
with a rockers core
as true and blue
as the ancient lore

when i play
i feel alive
i feel so good
like i cant die

god, what i wouldnt give.....
to be that guy

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-08-23 12:54 PM

wow, that was amazing... i love all your poems but i really thought this was my favorite by you... i can really relate to this well..... except for the guy part:P but this was beautifully written... good write hope to see another poem by you soon.
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

2 posted 2006-08-23 01:32 AM

when i play
i feel alive
i feel so good
like i cant die

yes i can sooo relate to that...
i LOOOOVE this poem alot! amazing job. i really really really like it

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-08-23 11:04 AM

Omgosh! This is like, wow, I can't even think of a word to describe how much I liked it and how good I think it is... lol

My favorite part would have to be the ending though; The ending had a bit of a twist, it wasn't what I was expecting, which, I liked that, things that you don't expect are my favorite kind of poems...

Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-04-10 08:59 PM

oh wow that was wow you captured feelings that can only be captured in a poem like yours very well done

~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
Junior Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 15
Alabama, United States

5 posted 2011-01-14 08:23 PM

i really really really liked this poem i can so relate to this i like its Awesome!!!.....GREAT JOB

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

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