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mgoodman1989 Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 93Iowa, USA |
Not really a poem... I guess... everyone at one point or another will look back and say, why did I do that? What was I thinking? Well, I have changed a lot. I've become someone that I'm not necesarrily proud of. Who are you? Where did you come from? Stop posing as the girl my parents think is me I don't like you so just leave me alone Your rotten, negetive attitude has no place here teenage hormones GET OUT! Leave my body! My heart, my soul! Your ruining everything An awful wave of anger has flooded over me drowning the girl I used to be standing before the mirror I can see what has to be done Using the blade I hold in my hand I shall set the 'old' me free! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
it sounds that this is more venting than any thing else. but you did get your message across very clearly |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
yeah I have to agree... But don't cut yourself that's never the answer. I would know, I went down that path before and It got me nowhere i wanted to be. i just hope you don't make the same dession that i did. But other then that I thought this was a good poem, you had some rhymes to it so I think you can call it a poem. But what ever. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I agree with everything said above^^ Venting can be a good thing though, in fact vent instead of cutting! It sometimes just helps to get all those emotions out before you explode... I know that I haven’t seen you on here in awhile so I just want to remind you that everyone here on pip is more than happy to listen if you ever need someone to hear. I hope that things improve for you in the future and I know that you have taken the first step by admitting you don’t like your life at the moment. You just need to take another and another until you arrive at the point where you feel complete again, with God’s grace that will be sooner rather than later. Good luck and God bless!  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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mgoodman1989 Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 93Iowa, USA |
Apparently I give off the wrong impression. A very strong wrong impression. I'm sorry for any confusion, but I do not now, nor have I ever cut myself. Life stinks, but I'll get over it. Thanks for reading. Love much, Michelle |
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toriber Junior Member
since 2010-06-10
Posts 22texas |
i totaly love this one!! |
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