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3 Tears
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3 Tears |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
One tear is for you. Second tear is for the ones that couldn't be true. Third tear was for you and me when you said we were through. I'm sure the future, there's gonna be tears. That's not really my fears. My fear was losing you, do you know what you put me through? I cried, I tried, I even died. But all you cared about was that I lied. I can assure you that I never did. What you heard was just a huge fib. So these three tears I cried for you, This is what you put me through. This is for my ex- boyfriend Fabian I'm sorry what you heard and i hope one day we can be back together. You are still in my heart and you will alway be there.. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I liked this one a lot, but could you maybe explain this line, "Second tear is for the ones that couldn't be true." I'm not quite sure where that fits into the whole poem. I mean I have a good idea what it's talking about but I just want to double check with you, so if you would explain I would appreciate that... Thanks for sharing  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
"Second tear is for the ones that couldn't be true." That fits in when the whole lies started and he thought everyhthing that person said was true. so yeah. Hope that's what you were thinking. |
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