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Teen Poetry #7

it comes down to knowing

synthetic
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 70
ontario, canada

0 posted 2006-08-12 12:18 PM

Go back to the start,
where you walked into my heart.
Found your way into my dark,
set the pain in my soul apart.

Nobody said you'd be the one,
burning hotter than the sun.
It's funny how I believe I've won,
simply because the lesson is done.

Turn me away from the hurt I know,
in hopes that someway I'll grow.
Truly feeling the smile I purposely show,
has won over the sorrow that's become my foe.

So baby maybe just maybe,
you need to be the one who saves me.
The one that brings me to safety,
I've been missing your arms lately.

Through my desire you can see my eye,
beholding in a united pose both you and I.
Me holding on to a glass of wine,
as the grapevine whispers me secrets of time.

So if there were confusion about us,
it would have to go something like this.
No patterns, no love lines - my lifeline,
would most definitely fade away into farewell.
So wish me well as I drift off,
uncertitude in its most crude form,
this cold you feel I'm use to it's so warm.
Find me spining in turn, in hurt,
a tear giving me a clue on which way's up
so I can be able to put my feet down.
You're my mountain that I'll climb,
you're a problem that I'll make fine.
I swear.
But if there were really confusion about us,
it would of gone something like that.

Coldplay is playing cold tunes that shock my system,
reminding me that those important instants I've missed some.
But I'm sure loving you is my heart's sole function,
so in turn your hurts I'll inherit and fix them.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-08-12 03:37 PM

So baby maybe just maybe,
you need to be the one who saves me.
The one that brings me to safety,
I've been missing your arms lately.

this was my favorite stanza i really thought it had a nice flow. good poem and thanks for sharing.
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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