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Teen Poetry #7

The possibility of me

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-08-07 03:24 PM

You don’t see it
But I do
The way you look at her
The way you talk to her
Always with a smile

You have no idea
But I do
You like her
You want her
I can see it now

Is there any hope
for me?
Is there any way
that you could see?
The way I look at you
The way I talk to you
Always with a smile?

You have eyes for only her.
Too bad you eyes can’t see
What lies right in front of you
The possibility of me

droppinginsideout
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 54
TENN

1 posted 2006-08-07 03:39 PM

man ive been through that too many times except with girls. i know how you feel. your words took my thoughts from me exactly

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-08-07 09:43 PM

I really like this poem. I like the way it ended. Great Job!!!

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

I'mAround
New Member

since 2006-08-08

Posts 3
England

3 posted 2006-08-09 11:15 AM

This was the first poem I read here and the reason I joined. I couldn't help but comment.

Great poem, really easy to relate to, and I loved it.

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

4 posted 2006-08-09 06:03 PM

amazing poem!! i like this alot! man you definitely have a ton of awesome poems. this is really good because i can so easily relate to it...
great one : )

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-08-09 07:05 PM

that was really awesome i loved it....wow
thanx for sharing
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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