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Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

0 posted 2006-05-18 03:01 PM

ok uh i wrote this for my brother.....i know its short but oh well.....so tell me what ya think please!...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your clothes are sitting nicely
Folded in your drawers,
With all my might, i refuse
To believe your really gone.

Your book still open,
Sitting on your desk,
Cause i still cant believe
Your lifes already done.

Your rooms just as your left it
Awaiting your return,
With all my heart and soul
I refuse to let you go.

Your place in my heart
has not been refilled,
Cause your always gonna be there
And thats something i'll always know!

XO Michael D.W
RWG (rest with God)

<3~Donna

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

1 posted 2006-05-18 09:56 PM

WOW… that’s a very sad but beautiful poem, I’m even crying. I hope your doing better because the letting go part is the hardest thing to do. I’m still having trouble letting go of my two great grandmothers that have past a way this year.

I hope one day we both can let go

*Leah

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-05-19 10:10 PM

Yeah i have to agree, this poem has really touched me. It's hard to let some body go, that wasn't supposed to. I would know the feeling. 4 years ago, the guy I loved and was dating, he got ran over, in N.Y. I couldn't even say my last good bye to him. His funeral was taken place up there. But what really gets to me is that I was on the phone with him when he was just sitting there. I heard everything. So yeah.

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

3 posted 2006-05-19 10:33 PM

wow first off...im so sorry about your brother. That must be so hard. and letting go is the worst part. this poem...amazing. i could just think of it...and it made me sad. It touched me and made me think and even though it didnt say anything about it, it shows me that i need to live life to its fullest because you never know when your time is up.
Thanks for sharing this. I really really liked it.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2006-08-06 11:15 PM

How very sad. Lovely tribute.

Very emotional read...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-08-09 08:44 PM

sad but i liked it good job.....
i'm sorry for your loss.
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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