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Teen Poetry #7

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-08-09 01:59 AM

try losing your best friend,
and you might just feel my pain,
try messing with lost trust again and again,
and you might understand me,
try fighting for what you belive is right,
and you might hear the truth in my heart,
then try looking in at my life,
and wonder how i can remain so calm,
and i'll try for one more day.

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-08-09 03:10 AM

Wow.. this was short but i really liked it.. I like the last line.. it pulled it all together. Great job..

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Sad_In_Havok712
New Member

since 2006-08-07

Posts 2

2 posted 2006-08-09 03:10 PM

you should go to my poem emotional bullet on the open poetry #38

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

3 posted 2006-08-09 05:46 PM

I really like this. I could relate very well, ive felt exactly that way! Ill be on the lookout for more of your work

A sign in the wind
The fatal last breath
Soft prelude to death
Alone
Amidst black roses

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-08-09 06:52 PM

thanx i liked this poem of all mine the best b/c it was more feelings than rhyming
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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