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Teen Poetry #7

Togetherness

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-08-01 08:27 PM

As you rest your hand upon my knee.
I knew then, this is something that must remain.
At that moment I knew then we belong.
All I can say to my broken heart is SO LONG!!!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-08-02 01:44 AM

Aww, what a cute poem! I loved the ending, it was a neat thing to see. Plus putting the words in capitals adds so much to the poem! Just helps it read bold and bright? I don't know what I'm talking about, it's late... It was a pleasurable read and a good write on your part

Thanks for sharing though

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John O'Driscoll
Junior Member

since 2006-03-13

Posts 43
Sandy, Utah

2 posted 2006-08-02 01:33 PM

LOVED IT!

it was short and sweet and to the point. way cool
John O.

True happiness is found after you think you have irretrievably lost it

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2006-08-02 09:51 PM

thanks you two, I like this one myself.

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